The Manipulator Book 3

LB

Reviewed it on April 18, 2025

OK

david.dland

It's good plot

Reviewed it on April 2, 2025

Needs editor to cut a lot of repetitive sections and correct spelling.

lkingjones1

Enough action to keep you engrossed

Reviewed it on April 27, 2025

I have enjoyed This series and look forward to the next book. While I appreciate the effort to provide a detailed amount of information about daily experience it has way too many duplicate scenarios to the point you are continuously jumping over repeat paragraphs. Did enjoy the plot to this point though.

When a proof reader and editor are greatly needed.

Reviewed it on March 30, 2025

You have a great story line in all three books. There are missing words, added words, many misspellings, and names wrong. Your grammar is awful. Hope you can take honest criticism.

maxloosli75

It's looking like a series ...

Reviewed it on March 25, 2025

Usual comments ... I enjoyed it, regardless. Will be waiting for the next part, money in hand ... [Edit] just reread it, and there's a section where a character's name flip-flops between Ashley and Alison almost on a per sentence basis ... get it edited and re-released, for God's sake!

billkost

Great new read from a very talented write

Reviewed it on April 28, 2025

I think this is excellent story, great character's and action. I Think you need a better proof reader. There were a number of confusing parts. I will definitely read book 4. Also, are you still going to finish From an Other Planet? I is also great story and can't wait for its conclusion. I will even purchase the conclusion books. Thank for for all your all your efforts to entertain me. Bill

jpursell

Good story, but long winded and repetitve

Reviewed it on April 4, 2025

Good. But repetitive.

crallenpe

interesting storyline hidden in irritating carbon-copy fluff

Reviewed it on March 28, 2025

this book is more than 80% repetitive (literally carbon copy) irritating fluff. Prepare to wear yourself out fast forwarding through the text.

jag.peter.kristiansson

Boring

Reviewed it on March 28, 2025

The same over and over again